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Wednesday, March 2, 2011

annette astatines story(3)

good lord i forgot i was posting the concept/summary story of Antonette Astatine... or something... hahaha here's the next batch~~

11[tenant girl arrives at the new home and found herself sharing a room with hero girl, they become close friends and the other loyal tenants staying almost for free at the house. life continues only now the apartment rubbles are no help to hero girls dilema. she works at the cafe as usual, and janitor at the school. she sees stalker guy free from the prison he said he'd move on and found something new to do, and said he'd stalk her from now on, she smiles and says okay. she brings him home and finds about tenant girl which brings him to a sort of conflict and a rising argument of not letting him stay. stalker hesitates but never agrees because he wants to stay with hero girl, hero girl doesn't notice because of a certain thing she noticed from the place of stalker guy. she found the compact of the girl in his things and remembered it to be of something similar to her grandmothers. she tried asking about tenant girl about the compact but says she doesn't know much only it was given to her by her mother since her death five yrs ago, but hero girl doesnt get it if her mother died almost two yrs ago and tenant girls five how can she remember something about the compact.]

12[ hero girl continues job as janitor and finds girly-boy contemplating on boyish-girl's sudden aloofness with him and both finds about small girl's burden over boyish-girls side by being dependent to her. girly-boy taunst small girl but only gets bad mouthed by boyish-girl. both felt angry about another but small girl realizes her fault even though hero girl hinted on it, she makes them friends and girly-boy accidentally says more. boyish-girl says shes fine with it and leaves hero girl and small girl thinking if they were fighting because they liked each other, but found that it was natural for the two to fight over things. tenant girl and stalker guy struggle to get along and finds a letter inside the compact by accident and see a note addressed to someone tenant girl didn't know.]

13[ stalker guy stalks hero girl to her job and ends up having an unassuming date with her since she was lett off for the day, with pay. they tell stories about each other and stalker guy finds about the name of the letter the same with hero girls father, he tells something but stops finding out that she has never even talked to her father that she never knew. tenant girl and stalker guy dwells on they're secret, after tenant girl finds out about the father name. the old lady spends time with hero girl during week ends off and goes to a library cafe as old as the now gone apartment, old lady tells of the history of the apartment and city. hero girl goes home carrying the old lady sleeping, she spots the three girls and goes with them.]

14[ tenant girl investigates on her own with her boyfriends help, and surprisingly with stalker's help and found about hero girls father and tenant girls relationship with each other. tenant girl is an illegitamate child of her mother to a man related to hero girls father, possibly his brother. the father played as a fake father to tenant girl with an alias, as her original father lived another life with his original family, figuring that hero's father must have had a secret relationship with tenant girls mother since he chose to stay and be with them till before he died of sickness. finding this out tenant girl becomes confused and sad, as the past made her a betrayer of hero girl her close friend. stalker becomes an unwilling bestfriend, feeling the jealous wrath of the boyfriend.]

15[ hero girl becomes busy by helping with the tenants new home and eldest girl helps along. freakish guy rants about the crowd but keeps his mouth shut in front of eldest girl, he urges them to find a new job after the collapse and forcibly helps them by asking around his peers if they had any way to give them jobs. small girl comes back with her dilema of choosing a course to take in college, since she was the only one taking it. hero girls figures she should take a college course as well since her pay in her job is too measly for her necessity even though, stalker, tenant girl and other close friends give her help, additional romance ensues when boyish-girl decides to attend college as well with a definite course while girly-boy is sent to work directly under his fathers supervision, making them lose more time for each other. tenant girl becomes aloof, hero girl takes notice while stalker guy keeps on trying to say the situation only to hear more of how hero girl never thought of anything for her father and that where ever he is must be what mother wants, tenant girl holds stalker guy and tells him never to tell about it and that stalker guy was forced to keep quite, much to his confused mind because he still felt feelings for tenant girl and it seems like he is beginning to have a deeper love for hero girl.]

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